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發表時間:2015/12/30

練了好多篇作文不知道有沒有寫對
想請各位幫我看看哪裡寫錯了
這是最近寫的其中一部分:(題目是考前60天的第7回)

James woke up earlier than usual to prepare for stuffs that would be used to go mountain climbing in the morning.He had already planned this trip for a month because it was an uncommon trip with his girl friend Amy who was the most charming girl in the world,bringing him warm,emotion,pleasure,passion according to her good nature and mood. He had thought about things coming up when he packed things into his sachet bag. As a result, he did not realised that something was missing.

Three hours later, James&Amy had almost climbed to the top of the mountain. The weather was still sunny&the sunshine had made a clear, blue sky under the open. However, after they had finished the lunch, everything turned differently .

The beautiful sky-blue was covered by dark clouds everywhere and the rainfall came pouring.They were both confused in a confused manner about why the weather would change so suddenly and rained so heavily. James recalled that he had seen the weather forecast yesterday that it was fine and cloudless without rain. It was not important whatever the forecast were, however , they had a big trouble then that they did not bring an umbrella !

In the end, the trip ended in disappointment and disaster. They had both caught a cold ! They might think about changing their place on another trip next time as the weather might be changeable and likely to alter.

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